This is
a poem that I wrote from a perspective of a person I’ve gotten in an argument
with.
HOW
COULD SHE!?
I’m
losing my temper,
And
am about to hit her,
The
loud noises my neighbors are hearing,
Are
coming from me,
Only
because she said something,
That
hurt me.
I’ve
never expected this from her,
And
now I have the same feeling,
She
had towards me.
Now
she made rifts in memories like spending time with me at the sea.
All
of this because she hates me.
The
challenge I took was writing about my own perspective of the argument.
HATRED
Looking
into her red eyes
Shouts
coming straight from her mouth
Hands
raising,
Anger
rising,
Everything
getting out of control.
These
thoughts that I have in my mind,
Will
come true,
As
soon as I tell her
I
hate you.
A six word poem I made was,
Solemn
feeling, intense tears appearing uncontrollably.
Dear Naima, I loved how you took three of your favorite prompts and did them all nicely. I love the names of your poems and the story behind them. I can tell you put some feeling into your poems and thought in your six word memoir. You did an EXCELLENT JOB!!
ReplyDeleteI thought your poems were very moving and emotional. I could tell you put a lot of emotion in them and a lot of descriptive details. I thought you did a great job including literary devices, too.
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